First song to get this started

[Barbless Hook]

Ok, since the music boards are real slow, I though I'd put up an original song that I wrote. I'm in the process of recording it at the moment. It's called "Wait". Tell me what you think.

Wait

verse:
So I hear you're really leaving
This time you've packed up for good
Yeah I guess the winds have gotta change
Cause now you're headed for hollywood

Last night I bet you thought
The night would never end
watching the time crawl by
I guess we'll just pretend

Pre Chorus:
Everything's so close
But so far away

Chorus:
Wait
I just want you to
Stay
But if you can't it's ok

Live
Your life's still undecided
Breathe
But we'll stay undivided

There's so much I wanna say
Wait, Just wait

Verse:
Don't tell me there's no pain
Cause I know how it feels
It takes more than novacaine
To make it dissappear

I've been down on my knees
Prayin' you wouldn't fade away
Now, a few thousand words later
It's a little too late

Pre Chorus:
Have you ever known
What it's like to be missed?

Chorus / Guitar Solo

Bridge:
I'll be there if you need me
Even when you're far away
You know time's unforgiving
So I just wanna say

Chorus



Thanks,
Barbless Hook

[Tyee King]

hey barbless hook,when i can listen to it.... ;D

[Barbless Hook]

After it's been recorded!

I've got the guitar part down, now need vocals. Man my vocals are nasty! Probably need some decent recording equipment too

[Barbless Hook]

For anyone who's interested I've uploaded an acoustic, one take renditioning of this song on Soundclick. The link is in my sig. Stay tuned for the multi layered version.